HIBARI, SHARA; Vongola

[Shara Hibari]

SHARA HIBARI

Basics

Nickname(s): Master Madame (all those who submit to her powerful will!)
Gender: Female
Age: Twenty Seven; November 9th
Ethnicity: Italian/Japanese
Sexuality: Pansexual
Occupation(s): Body Guard by day, Bouncer by night

Personality

Positives
• Loyal
• Brave
• Determined
• Vigilant
• Helpful

Negatives
• Dominant
• Insecure
• Vicious
• Distant
• Blunt

Likes
• Subordinates
• Spiders
• Ramen
• Tea
• Lollipops

Dislikes
• Illusionists
• Romance
• War
• Carbonated Drinks
• Warm places

History & Misc.

Shara is the middle child born to Kyoya Hibari’s middle son. Much like her father, she underwent difficult and rigorous training when she was about nine years old. She desired to prove herself as worthy of her grandfather’s attention, even if he had given little attention to his own children.

Unlike her grandfather and father, Shara’s mother made sure to take her and her younger sibling to interact with the other grandchildren of the Vongola family, thereby quickly making friends. It was these brief periods between training and school that Shara treasured and kept her going to keep including herself with the Vongola.
When she was fourteen, tragedy struck her family as Shara’s mother passed away. While people tried to comfort her, the teenage girl withdrew from those around her, and decided that the only way to truly be free from pain of relationships was to keep others at arm’s length.

As she matured in years, she continued to interact with the other members of the family, although she would never let any of them know about anything going on in her life besides what was surface level and observable by everyone.

Eventually, Shara told the current generation of guardians that she was uninterested in the position her grandfather had once held, instead choosing to merely be a member of the family. As such, she began to fill in and help out when needed, no matter if it was mission or simply combat training. Recently, she has volunteered to assist the Vongola guardians in any way possible, even if it means being pulled into the training of one of the boss candidate’s training.

After her mother’s death, she really only stayed in touch with her father (although that rarely occurred) and her younger sister. Outside of those two and her grandfather, she doesn’t really know what other family she has.

Member Information

Alias: AvivHighwind
Other Character(s): Aster Thornbrooke, Egann Ricatto, Mint Dolconda
Faceclaim:

Freezing, Teslad; Shara Hibari

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[Shara Hibari]

Box Information

Alias: Brutal Baroness
Affiliation: Vongola
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Flame Attribute & Abilities:
Cloud Flame
Inherited from her grandfather, Shara possesses the violet and billowing cloud flames. Cloud flames are known for their “Propagation” factor, which includes multiplying, increasing in size, and flame absorbing traits. Shara personifies the flames well, much like her grandfather.
>>Billowing Shroud
Using her cloud flames, Shara creates a violet cape that drapes over her forearms. This cape absorbs flames from enemies, using it to grow the cape. As Shara doesn't have any way of utilizing these absorbed flames, she often dissipates the clouds.
Duration/Cool Down 2 posts/2 posts

Box Weapon:
Cloud Tonfa Blades
These pair of blades is a variation of the weapons used by her grandfather, Kyoya. Using wrist braces and two handles, Shara is able to wield these flame-covered blades with great effectiveness, moving and fighting as if they were own limbs. Unlike her father tonfas, however, there is no hidden compartments or alternate forms for the box weapon to take.
>>Kaleidoslash
Utilizing the cloud’s “propagation” factor, Shara launches a flame infused slash at a foe. This energy slash begins to multiply quickly, creating a fierce vortex of strikes that are difficult for opponents to avoid and defend against.
Duration/Cool Down: 1 post/3 posts

Box Animal:
Cloud Black Widow
A rather interesting choice for a box weapon, Shara has named the large female black widow “Arachnia” and often keeps her in her box unless she truly needs her.
>>Threaded Cage
Using the cloud flames, Arachnia lays a vast network of invisible silk forming an entrapping web. This web can be used as an invisible shield, absorbing the flames of others. The result is large, glowing “dew drops” of flame form on the web.
Duration/Cool Down 4 posts/4 posts

Equipment:
Reinforced metal plated boots.

Miscellaneous Items:
-Spider-shaped Cloud Ring
-Wallet
-ID
-Various Keys
-Handcuffs

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[AKI]

Hold up!

Okay a couple things here, first off, Hibari cannot be her father unless you up her age. Because she is way too young for that. It would be pushing it to let you even do that. So it will not happen, you must change this. Her traits and her likes/dislikes also make her seem like a Hibari clone. Rather then his child she seems like someone just took Hibari's personality and his likes/dislikes, changed a few things. So um..change her up a bit? She can't be exactly like her father. No child is exactly like a parent, or a grandparent. They would have various differences.

Shara is the youngest child of Kyoya Hibari, but also the child most like him. As such, she was exposed to rigorous training at a young age, with a desire to prove herself as of worth to her father. Her father’s high standards, however, were almost at an unreachable level.

It was when Shara turned down the position for the Vongola Cloud guardian that her father really started to make an effort to get to know her. This was something she hadn’t expected, but relished as her father continued to spend time with her on a more frequent basis.

Recently, she has “volunteered” to help out the new Vongola guardians in any way possible, even if it means being pulled into the training of one of the boss candidate’s training. This is due to a deal to be able to fight her father should she successfully train a competitor worthy of his standards.

She also has chosen not to keep in contact with her siblings. As such, she has very little (if any) knowledge of any relatives outside of the family she grew up with.

Again her history is way too vague. She sounds more like a copy of Hibari then his child or grandchild since you will have to change the way you wrote this. She is too young to be his child, so either up her age or make her a grandchild. But either way her age will need to be edited. Hibari is not the type to TRY and get to know someone. His personality is not that way, so just because she turned it down does not mean he'd try to get to know her. That is like changing his personality to suit something else. You jump around too much again, make a fluid time line, not just she did this. And then oh she did that. Hibari as her father should be removed entirely, and you can be a bit more descriptive and less jump around with her history please.

If she denied the position why is she labeled as such. Her label would not be cloud guardian if she denied the position and said she didn't want it. So that needs to be fixed or explained in the history. I did not even read her abilities, it sounds too much like Hibari too me. She would not have to be a copy of him. Branch out more.

Black Cloud Ring

Why does she even have that? It doesn't make sense, it doesn't seem like something she'd end up having honestly.

ADDITION FROM RISA: Overall, the abilities /seem/ to be okay. However, cloud flames don't increase speed. That would be more of a sun flame thing. So I'm going to ask for you to make changes to her flame ability. The box animal ability duration seems a bit long - so if you could decrease that, it would be wonderful. As a side note, Ryuu  doesn't like her because she has a spider. He hates spiders. She could definitely torment him with that animal of hers. 

I'm going to provide further commentary on her age - right now, the oldest person to have a child on the site is Yamamoto at the age of 46. That's already pushing it and his daughter, Ryuu's mother and Yamamoto's daughter, Rika, is 39. Hibari is two years older than the main group and her being 33 makes Hibari 53 when she's born. That's pushing it way more than 46. 

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[Shara Hibari]

Hope the edits fit what you two asked for AKI and Risa

[AKI]

Hold up!

Okay just a few things on the abilities, the first one does not seem to suit cloud flames. It's more of a sun flame ability, so I think you should replace that with a more cloud based ability. Since Cloud flames do not work for speed in that way. Just try to focus on the cloud flames as a whole, and think about what to do with that. Other then that little thing, the app looks better <3

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[Shara Hibari]

Better? Hopefully this works!

[AKI]

Hold up!

Yea still not digging the ability, cloud flames are not like actual flames. You could think of the ability in another way. Think about how it effects things, like making them grow bigger and how dangerous that can be. If you use this in the way you are now it doesn't make sense. The more they struggle the more clouds will strangle them? I think you should take a look at the other cloud guardian apps and see what they have done. Maybe it'll help you with an idea.

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[Shara Hibari]

I was watching Gundam Build Fighters and saw the beam cloak Wing Gundam Fenice used and thought it would make a good basis for an ability.

Hope it's what I need!

[Risa]

Accepted

Thank you for bearing with us and making all the changes that we asked you to make. c: Welcome to the Vongola...as not a Guardian...but welcome anyway. Ryuu's staying away from you, by the way. Spiders scare him.

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